It's not bad, but I don't really like it.
The text looks weird because of the black things I think, not smooth.
And I think the black things don't really match with the background image.

I respect your opinion.
And here is my reply to it.

1) ~8 mins work on it.
2) My text engine on PhotoShop is not working, so I had to use Paint for the text, and paste it into the PS window. (less effects, worse quality)
3) Since I spend that short time on it, I didn't think much of the ideas. This was the first idea. To put the text with a color similar to the background.. after trying 2-3 effects that failed, I put the black things just as a contrast.

Note: I am not going to graphic design school, neither have completed any PS course. All I do is from the knowledge I have from some guides and the way I like the final look of the project.

Regards

its not bad but its not the best iv seen no offence and yes it does seem like it was rushed as u said shivers 8 min.

So sorry for the late reply mate, didn't notice this at all.

Thanks a lot, its nice.